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Blue haze of mountains
Jutting in the horizon
White caps of snow softly blanketing the tops
The sun gazing over the peaks.
Red, pink, purple, orange
painting the sky
turning purple
Casting shadows on vallies below.
Leaves rustling
Whipperwills calling their name
Peace
Peace
Peace
Calming my soul.
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Great poem - here's my poetic opinion, u know I luv poetry....consider rewording the White caps line and the sun gazing line. ex: The gazing sun peeks. Also, don't capitalize Painting sky line, Turning purple line or the word Casting. You have used too many "the's" and should consider cutting some out. Well,that's my take on that deary.....loved it....jeri
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